Sunday 27 November 2011

Cinderboy

“You come to the test match. No way you’re as embarrassing as a mentally ill person” his rotten step brother Logan said. Logan was a scrawny and ugly white teenager. His other step brother Michael was a chubby ugly pale person. Cinderboy was the only handsome one. Cinderboy got so angry. “Heel boy” his gold digging step mother said. “I am not a dog” he responded angrily. “That’s right you’re our ugly butler” his disgusting step mother said. Cinderboy’s face went red.

“Let’s go Michael. Bye ugly” Logan said. “BE QUIET” Cinderboy screamed. “Get outside” Michael uttered.

Cinderboy loved playing rugby because he wasn’t allowed to play rugby because he had to do chores. Cinderboy went inside and got his hidden black and white headgear and mouth guard. Cinderboy’s favourite team was the All Blacks. Cinderboy soon invited his friendly friend from school over for a game of rugby on his gigantic lawn with long grass. As they played Graham Henry walked past the mansion to go to the test match. Graham Henry watched with amazement as Cinder boy scored 28 nil on his friend.

 Graham Henry grabbed Cinderboy’s arm and said “You’re coming with me” Cinderboy was dragged to the humongous stadium called Eden Park. Cinderboy was put in black shirt with a white collar that had the number 8 on the back. The all blacks and Cinderboy did their haka in front of South Africa.

The whistle blew as the All Blacks kicked the ball. Cinderboy chased the ball as fast as he could. He caught the ball and got tackled. The half back gave it to Sonny Bill Williams. He ran and offloaded it to Cinderboy. Cinderboy scored under the post so Dan Carter could get the conversion. Dan the Man got the conversion and made the score 7 nil. Cinderboy was feeling on top of the world.

Cinderboy was a hero. He scored 7 tries for the all blacks. Habana got the only try by using his speed. In the end the score was 56-5.

Just before full time Cinderboy remembered that his step brothers would be home straight away. Cinderboy ran as fast as lightning when his mouth guard fell out of his mouth. He didn’t even think of going back for it.

Cinderboy arrived at the mansion and continued the chores. The step Brothers arrived gossiping about the match. While Cinderboy continued the chores there was a knock at the door. The Step brothers rushed to the door. Graham Henry asked them to try on a mouth guard. Michael tried it first. “It fits” he said lying out of his teeth as the mouth guard fell out. Logan tried to try it on but it was to small. “Bye” Logan said. “Wait. I want to try him” Graham Henry Said.

Cinderboy tried the mouth guard on. It fitted perfectly. Graham Henry grabbed Cinderboy and took him to his big house.

After many games Cinderboy became rich and bought the mansion. He made his old step brothers and step mother do the chores for $5 an hour.

Cinderboy lived happily ever after. 

Sunday 6 November 2011

Athletics day

Bang. The thick brown bricks smashed together. The competitors had ran as fast as lightning. I almost fell over. I ran quickly to try and place myself in first or second place so I could go to the amazing finals. I was racing my friend in this race. It felt like it was not going to stop for this short 100m race. The light wind blew past my face. I loved the cool breeze on my face. We were nearly at the finish. In the final seconds of the race I was desperate to come first or second, but just like my friend I didn't place myself in the finals. Well in the end all that matters is that I tried.